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06-13
06-13
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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of unisexual schools.
Boy schools and girl schools shoot up very rapidly both in foreign countries and at home. In China, girl schools have enjoyed a very long history since one hundred years ago. Many sociologists and educationalists present their views on this issue from different angles. In this essay, I will zero in on the advantages and disadvantages of the controversial phenomenon. (60 words)
Some parents prefer to send their children to boy schools or girl schools in the hope that their children can concentrate on study and acquire adequate knowledge and skills because unisexual schools can make out appropriate curriculum and courses for students according to their sexual characteristics. In some girl schools, students have a wider choice of courses such as dancing, music, embroidery and drawing, which can cultivate their feminine elegance and charm. Furthermore, students can devote themselves fully to their study and will not be distracted. Campus love affairs are very common in the current society under the influence of media. Boy schools and girl schools can eradicate contact between different sexes and purify the campus environment. (117 words)
Of course, some experts p...
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06-13
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The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are the causes and how to solve it?
Juvenile delinquency is a very serious problem confronting us in modern society. At the same time, the rate of young women crimes spearheads very fast. Some sociologists and educationists show great concern about this problem. In this essay, I will find out the causes for this issue and explore some possible solutions.
First of all, the rapid development of society and the changes of people's value of the world account mainly for the issue. In the old days, women were confined to housework and baby-sitting, which barricaded women's steps. Now, with the eye-catching development of economy, many young women go out to find a job, which renders them more opportunities to contact the outside world. As a consequence, young women are apt to be influenced by the malfeasance in the society.
Secondly, the rise of criminal rate attributes to the lack of education of women. The prosperity and luxury in some metropolises are very attractive to some young women. Some of them leave the countryside in the hope that they can make a good fortune in the cities, where they often find themselves disappointed for lack of good education or skills. Therefor...
06-08
TOPIC: Traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by.moving the large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
下面為一考生的回憶,這是中國(guó)考生普遍的寫作思路(經(jīng)典案例):
居然要把大公司和大工廠都搬到農(nóng)村去?解決交通和住房問(wèn)題? 偶第一個(gè)不同意
先講講人權(quán)問(wèn)題，憑什么要大公司的搬，大公司的人就不是人么?再考慮一下搬那么大一個(gè)公司要花多少錢?誰(shuí)來(lái)替歐們出? 該死的，有錢干嘛不去多建設(shè)些地鐵?偶們雖然在大公司收入比較高，但好歹也上有小下有老，我們每天也要回家的。你以為公司搬了，我們每個(gè)人都愛(ài)廠如家了? 去死吧，我們要每天開(kāi)車回家的啊，這個(gè)都沒(méi)想到?你還改善個(gè)P交通啊。
還是來(lái)談點(diǎn)實(shí)際吧，想解決問(wèn)題? 來(lái)來(lái)來(lái)，聽(tīng)我細(xì)細(xì)說(shuō)來(lái)，最起碼也要多蓋房子，多建地下鐵，用城市包圍農(nóng)村---別問(wèn)我為什么，這個(gè)好像是XX領(lǐng)袖說(shuō)的?；蛟S我們還可以搞搞高科技，什么天空之城啦，空中飛車?yán)玻瑢?lái)不再是夢(mèng)了。
點(diǎn)評(píng):
此考生在打"擦邊球",即偏題但沒(méi)有完全跑題.這種情況下就算是英語(yǔ)專業(yè)博士生,最高也只能拿6分.
我先來(lái)boil down the topic: moving可以解決 traffic and housing problems, 你同意嗎?也就是說(shuō), 人家是為了解決traffic and housing problems才建議大動(dòng)干戈搬遷大公司工廠及員工的.
你若同意,你就必須維護(hù)這個(gè)建議, 論證為何可行;你若不同意, 則須批駁這個(gè)建議,即論證為何不可行.
所以最簡(jiǎn)單直接的方法就是一個(gè)主體段落論證traffic problems--traffic jams, traffic accidents --搬遷能解決嗎? 另一段主體來(lái)論證housing problems--high density, sky-high prices, too less spaces per dweller--搬遷能解決這些問(wèn)題嗎?
好了!有了總體的思路,咱來(lái)看此考生是怎樣偏題的.(分解成5部分來(lái)點(diǎn)評(píng))
1. "講講人權(quán)問(wèn)題，憑什么要大公司的搬，大公司的人就不是人么?再考慮一下搬那么大一個(gè)公司要花多少錢?誰(shuí)來(lái)替歐們出?"-----------------全部與答題無(wú)關(guān), 扣!
2."該死的，有錢干嘛不去多建設(shè)些地鐵?"----------假如反對(duì),這可作為solution, (后面已有, 重復(fù)了)
3. "偶們雖然在大公司收入比較高，但好歹也上有小下有老，我們每天也要回家的。你以為公司搬了，我們每個(gè)人都愛(ài)廠如家了? 去死吧，"-------------與答題邏輯聯(lián)系不緊,扣!
4."我們要每天開(kāi)車回家的啊，這個(gè)都沒(méi)想到?你還改善個(gè)P交通啊"----------全文就這一...
06-08
06-08
聲明：我們的范文僅為大家提供一個(gè)寫作思路，以及一些可參考的論點(diǎn)論據(jù)，文章僅供參考，切記不可原文背誦，否則可能導(dǎo)致極低的分?jǐn)?shù)!
Nowadays many people stay off job or school due to stress from work or study. You should use specific reasons and your own experience to analyze the cause and offer the solution.
---------Discussion—B-------------324 words in total-----------
Pressure is always there in some form, whether in the workplace or in our personal lives. If you allow it to control your performance in a negative way, then it becomes stress. I would like to examine the cause of stress, which has led to many people staying off job or school, and offer possible solutions as follows. [58 words]
Firstly, do not overestimate your abilities. It is not uncommon that many arrogant people first overrate themselves before starting a task, then they stay off the job after having found it extremely difficult. These people are pessimistic ones. Actually if they knew who they are they would not place themselves in this plight. Take me for example, I am an architect working for a construction company. Whenever I am given an assignment, I would study it for a couple of days. If it is over my head I would recommend another more capable colleague to complete it. This is the way I am and consequently and more importantly, I never feel stressful at work.. [113 words]
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06-07
06-07
聲明：我們的范文僅為大家提供一個(gè)寫作思路，以及一些可參考的論點(diǎn)論據(jù)，文章僅供參考，切記不可原文背誦，否則可能導(dǎo)致極低的分?jǐn)?shù)!
When a five-year-old child commits a crime, should the parents be punished for that? In your opinion, at what age should a child start to be responsible for what he/she did?
----------Argumentation--------289 words in total--------------
There seem to be more senseless/unconscious crimes done by young children that appear to lack a motive or even indulge a whim. What a thorny issue to handle for both the parents and the victim involved! Some people may argue that children are products of environment, so the family should be responsible for all delinquency of them. This is absolutely wrong. ( 61 words)
In modern society, parents are not the only influence on children. Generally a five-year-old child is sent to attend kindergarten. Obviously the young child spends a great deal of time exposed to other influences such as the teachers, other children, other parents and television. Particularly in many contemporary families, both the parents are required to work, sometimes over time. This situation could possibly result in the little kids falling under more influence of others or media. If this is the case then too many people should be punished whenever young children commit crimes. Undoubtedly this would be too impractical to implement. ( 1...
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