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03-31
雅思寫(xiě)作的備考除了要攻克詞匯、長(zhǎng)難句、語(yǔ)法之外，還有一個(gè)很重要的方法就是多看雅思寫(xiě)作范文。下文《雅思寫(xiě)作范文：犯罪》由出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)雅思頻道為您整理，供您參考，了解更多考試信息，請(qǐng)收藏本站。
Crimes undermine human society. Reasons for committing a crime are varied and complex, so we could not say that violation of law is just human nature and that people’s tendency to break the law could be stopped when they are young.
We are still not sure what causes people to commit a crime. The reason seems to be clear in cases in which a thief steals money to make a living or buy things normally unaffordable. Many thieves, when caught and interviewed, reveal that they come from poor families and have very little education. Therefore we could establish a relation between less privileged family background and low level of education. Many people used to believe that parents could teach their children the harms of wrongdoing by showing them the consequences of such action and the obligation of complying with social norms. Such method works for most children who are aware of what they are doing and what would happen from their action. But we also learn from news or other sources that many high-level officials take bribes or abuse power for their own benefit. Such people with high income and good education clearly know what they are doing and the possible consequences. Such crimes would not have happened if tendency to commit crimes could be stopped when people were young.
Moreover, we know that people tend to act for their own benefit, but we do n...
03-31
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[題目]You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic.
A number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used: Western medicine (using drugs and surgery), herbal medicine, acupuncture (using needles at certain points of the body), homoeopathy (using minute doses of poisons), and so on. How important is the patient’s mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of the treatment?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
[提示]
你可以按照下面的提綱寫(xiě)作：
Different medical traditions (a list of examples is given)
Patient’s mental attitude: the way the patient feels about the treatment
Effectiveness of the treatment: how much better does it make the patient?
在寫(xiě)作之前，請(qǐng)問(wèn)自己以下的問(wèn)題：
Do I think the patient’s attitude is important?
What examples can I give where the patient’s attitude was important, or irrelevant?
在文章中你必須：
Describe some of the different ways people feel about medical treatment (hopeful, hopeless, trusting, skeptical...).
Say if in your opinion the feelings affect the ...
03-26
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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they’ve been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they’ve had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in...
03-19
其實(shí)多看看雅思寫(xiě)作高分范文也是提高寫(xiě)作水平的一種方法，而且是最直觀的方法，以下由出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)雅思頻道為您提供《2014雅思寫(xiě)作高分范文：能源》，供您借鑒參考，歡迎您訪問(wèn)出國(guó)留網(wǎng)瀏覽最權(quán)威的考試資訊。
There is nothing unusual about energy like coals and oils being consumed, principally because economic development depends on natural resources all the time. But what is happening today is extraordinary judged by the standards of the past. It is energy depletion on a massive scale and this problem is so knotty that should deserve our closer heed.
Amongst the diverse factors contributing to the energy crises around the world, government’s short-sighted policies and citizens’ extravagant use of automobiles are probably the two most significant ones. By presuming on their natural resources, quite a few countries, especially developing ones, are eager to develop their economy in order to gain an edge over their rivals. Admittedly, their intensive use of the energy facilitates, to some extent, the developments of other industries in short term. Additionally, the amount of private cars increases at such a breakneck speed that the petroleum used amounts to an intimidating proportion of the natural resources.
The consequences are undoubtedly disastrous for human beings. Although countries can boast their growth of GDP, their citizens have to endure the ever deteriorated environment with stinking gas belching from factories and vehicles, polluted water due to fuels infiltrating underground, even ultraviolet radiation in the absence of ozone ...
03-19
怎樣寫(xiě)出高分作文一直是困擾考生們的問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編分別將兩篇5分和7分雅思作文進(jìn)行對(duì)比，大家就自然明了差別在哪里，下文《雅思寫(xiě)作高分范文對(duì)比》由出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)雅思頻道為您提供，歡迎您訪問(wèn)出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)瀏覽最新資訊。
Let’s compare two answers to a question.The topic is as follows:
International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
A Poor Essay - The following is a band 5 essay.
International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly.
Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plants.
Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean.
Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun.
But on the other hand,...
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目前雅思考生大致分成三大類(lèi)：
語(yǔ)言能力很低，文法幾乎不通，詞匯量也極其有限，寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)分為5分。
這類(lèi)學(xué)生最希望通過(guò)背誦幾篇范文能夠在考試時(shí)混個(gè)5分?？珊芏鄷r(shí)候，事與愿違，個(gè)別學(xué)生日夜苦背，積累了十多篇文章，結(jié)果還是連5分都未到。這類(lèi)學(xué)生最大得問(wèn)題有兩個(gè)：不能獨(dú)立地寫(xiě)出一句完整正確的單句并且考試看不懂題目。
這倆個(gè)問(wèn)題，后者更為致命。
考生甲：在寫(xiě)大作文時(shí)把population(人口)認(rèn)為是pollution(污染), 并在文中運(yùn)用了大量自己被誦過(guò)的范文的句子，結(jié)果成績(jī)?yōu)?分。
考生乙：大作文題目：“Sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Job training and education should replace it .To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" 該考生未看懂題目第一句話(huà)，通篇在撰寫(xiě)曾經(jīng)寫(xiě)過(guò)的教育與職業(yè)為題，得分3.5。
建議：要想讓自己在寫(xiě)作考試中取得一個(gè)基本分，第一關(guān)是要看懂題目。因此，建議詞匯量特別小的考生平時(shí)多看考過(guò)的考題，網(wǎng)上有每次的考題回憶，培訓(xùn)課堂一般都會(huì)發(fā)放。由于雅思考題話(huà)題重現(xiàn)率非常高，故而熟練掌握以前的題目對(duì)應(yīng)考時(shí)讀懂題目會(huì)有很大幫助。
考生丙：只會(huì)使用不做任何變化的套句，自己無(wú)法寫(xiě)出一句正確完整的單句。考試得分4。
建議：在背套句的時(shí)候，一定要多做常見(jiàn)功能性句子的填空式練習(xí)，并注意詞性的正確使用。不宜寫(xiě)太多長(zhǎng)句或復(fù)雜句。以掌握基本句型和話(huà)題性詞匯為主。
凡目標(biāo)為5分的考生，備考時(shí)應(yīng)注重題意的理解，寫(xiě)作基本模板的訓(xùn)練和簡(jiǎn)單句式的練習(xí)，尤其注意常見(jiàn)單詞的詞性正確使用。
有能用于簡(jiǎn)單溝通的詞匯量，能撰寫(xiě)常見(jiàn)句式，單句撰寫(xiě)熟練。寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)分?jǐn)?shù)：6分。
這類(lèi)學(xué)生是目前人數(shù)最多的，一般在突六和精六班級(jí)。該類(lèi)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)潛力也較大，在審題沒(méi)有大的差錯(cuò)時(shí)，一般得分5分到5.5 之間。這類(lèi)學(xué)生在自己閱讀范文時(shí)，喜歡積累難詞和復(fù)雜句式，部分學(xué)生在考試時(shí)過(guò)度傾向于用生僻詞匯，長(zhǎng)句可寫(xiě)4-5行，甚至一段一句。這些學(xué)生普遍存在的問(wèn)題是論證能力差，扣題不緊，對(duì)句子功能的把握不強(qiáng)。
建議：在老師的指導(dǎo)下，批判式的學(xué)習(xí)范文，在積累詞匯和句式的基礎(chǔ)上，重點(diǎn)把握句子的功能以及主體段論證的展開(kāi)。關(guān)注審題的精確性和相關(guān)主題的論證材料積累。句式長(zhǎng)短句合理使用，不宜寫(xiě)過(guò)長(zhǎng)句子，絕不能出現(xiàn)一段一句的情況。
有很扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底的考生，寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)7分或以上成績(jī)。
挑選各種題型的范文簡(jiǎn)單閱讀即可。完全沒(méi)必要去研讀范文，否則只會(huì)誤導(dǎo)自己。
建議：注重同一話(huà)題不同角度的出題方式，確保自己的展開(kāi)角度緊扣題目指令?？删x雅思閱讀書(shū)籍及國(guó)外報(bào)刊的議論文，多積累地道語(yǔ)言和英語(yǔ)國(guó)家的文化背景和實(shí)例?？记翱蓢L試實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬。
對(duì)于所有的學(xué)生，范文的背誦都無(wú)太大意義，但審題這關(guān)對(duì)每位考生而言都極其重要。希望各位考生能充分利用現(xiàn)有的寫(xiě)作范文資料，閱讀資料和網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源，加強(qiáng)審題訓(xùn)練和語(yǔ)言基本功的練習(xí)，爭(zhēng)取在實(shí)戰(zhàn)中取得佳績(jī)。
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